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Tuesday, May 5, 2020

Evaluating

bad                                                                                        Docking day            
the guy put chocolate the paddock                                             
close to miss the van                                                                          I rate this a 10
bad cos thor  
  the chocolate guy flatten the fence like a house.                                                                                        they couldn't hear each                                                                                                                                                 


good   
 the family fond oh put the chocolate   
 on the paddock.  
Mikey better give him a hand.

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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 5, 2020 at 2:35 PM

    Hi Taimane, I like how you compared the good and bad things about Docking Day. Why did you give it a 10 as there were more bad points than good?
    Mr Matai

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  2. AnonymousMay 6, 2020 at 1:48 PM

    hi mane
    i like your work. it looks good and you did a great job

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